22A - Elevator Pitch No.3

#1 Pitch




#2 Reflection
In my last pitch, the comments I received were all positive, so I decided to keep the same pitch.
#3 Change (from feedback)
In the first pitch, my peers told me to incorporate the functionality of the app to my
customers to complete the pitch, so I added the basic functionality of my product to my second pitch.
Those were the only changes I had made.

Comments

  1. UnknownMarch 31, 2018 at 8:14 PM

    Hey Eli! Great job on your elevator pitch! from your first pitch to your second pitch, you did a really great job of incorporating the functionality of your app and you explained it well also. I think you improved from your first pitch to last pitch, so keeping it the same for this one was not a bad idea. I also think you improved of delivering the pitch as well, it flowed and you seemed more confident.

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